ONE LOVE

She was one of most beauty 

Met me at cross-way 

Her cheek was rosy 

Eyes were twinkled 

and her smile, gave me a sweet achievement. 

When I reached our destination 

I astonished fairy met just right. 

All times I kept eye's at her 

I can't do anything expect her 

I felled in my first love 

but my happiness was very short. 

Next day, she was out of reach 

She was a relation 

I was sad, all day 

She is my one-love 

I never forget her all my life.

Reviews

[Rehan Roy]

'Eyes were twinkled...She was a relation'-The inception of relationship starts with 'twinkled eyes' but sometimes ends with wet eyes. It may be true love or mere infatuation.But, yet for then moments,it seems 'She is my one love'.Those moments are too ineffable...if you are a true lover. Dear poet, you have written it beautifully.

[Saddam]

A big thank you for this lovely feedback for this. thank you very much.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very sweet beautifully said yet but so Beautiful
love the romance. love these lines. blessings






She was one of most beauty

Met me at cross-way

Her cheek was rosy

Eyes were twinkled

and her smile, gave me a sweet achievement.

[Simran Kewlani]

Very well written. It is amazing and pure love. Nothing else. Keep it up. (:

[Penny]

It is rather amusing how such short meetings are etched in our minds as sweet memories. The feeling is wel described in the poem. Nice job.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very beautiful poem, though sad

[Saddam]

thank you sir... but this is it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well we all get that one chance really, and embrace it as much as damn possible, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thank you very much for giving it time. i'm so pleased.

[Shaquana Adams]

So it was a one shot thing. This reminds me of a scene about summer love. Good work! :)

[Saddam]

I am so pleased to hear you dear...love you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

We all have a rollercoaster ride when it comes to relationships.Well penned :)

[Saddam]

many many thanks to you dear.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"She is my one-love

I never forget her all my life."

You have summed it up marvelously in the last two lines. The ups and downs of your relationship and her importance to you...Bravo..........

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir for your feedback....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir...:)....................