LOVE

Love make me cry 

Love make me fly 

Love feels me stranger 

 Love made me stronger. 

 My life was just pause 

 For living, love gave me cause 

 My heart was just beating 

 Love taught it to jingling. 

 Whenever, somewhere, I got dark 

 Next moment love spark 

 My life, actually, changing on a track 

 You, your love come for ending this rack. 

 Love with you, unless no life is there 

 Parted with you, no longer, I can bear.

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

And, well, your writing slashes each vein -with a beautiful ache. Lovely to read your verses after long time (I was away !). Keep penning, your ink shines. Cheers

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Sami Khalil]

"I got dark
Next moment love spark
My life, actually, changing on a track
You, your love come for ending this rack."

Get back on track or change the track, sir. An excellent write...:)...................

[Saddam]

Your presence is always a gift for me. Thank you very much, Sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Matching Socks]

That pivotal moment generally follows this feeling, to stay or to let go.
The push and pull of a relationship so nicely described SSADD.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear

[katja]

can't live with it, can't live without it...
... something to contemplate indeed
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thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

[Saddam]

Thank you for that such a beautiful comment.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

That estrangement regardless of how always cuts deepest, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

Lots of thanks to you friend. You always come with freshness.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome.