CAN LoVE HAPPEN TWICE?

Now days, again I think of rise 

With you can love happen twice? 

When my girl left me I was in deep shock 

My life was a question and a gloom was everywhere 

Everything happiness in the world seems me unfair 

Life turn as curse and stuck 

Smile was just seemingly. 

But when I see your bloom face nice 

I started thinking can love happen twice? 

I ruined my big part 

For her, who left me alone 

For tracking her, I reach every nook and corner 

But one evening, she stopped me saying- Life is further 

And gave me this chronic pain and forlorn 

Always I wept at which I start. 

You gave me hope; this is end of my chaos 

I believe, with you, love can happen twice. 

With you, I’ll be happy 

With you, I’ll be certain in life 

For you, my life will be still autumn to spring 

For you, my heart’s string is tingling 

My life is purposeless and strife 

Make it jovial and cheery. 

For you, I can change my life’s price 

Would you think, love might be happen twice?

Reviews

[Sreenath]

i wonder you took inspiration by the book of ravinder singh "can love happen twice" just the title. this poem is mixture of emotion , i can relate to it and i think most of them in one or other juncture of life could relate to these lines because at some point of their life .this poem has raw feelings though.. mix of confusion and awkwardness together a nice piece loved reading it.. peace :)

[Saddam]

Got right friend, I take that title from the above book.
Thank you very much for stopping and reviewing this.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Yes. Love can happen twice. :)


Lovely work.
Thank you

[EmilyBianca]

This is a fantastic piece! I really liked it!

[Pinkyleeamy]

Oh I believe!! This was a refreshing poem. It feels great when we turn a new leaf over. The joys of love!

[S]

After putting your perspective of giving love a second chance, you pop the question
"Would you think, love might be happen twice?"
to her.
I dont think she could ever say no to that!
;)

Nice poem.

[Hibiki]

"love might be happen twice
how about true love...?" ;)
I really like this poem ^^

[lissalovesyou]

Yes, love can happen twice.
In fact, I just fell in love with this poem again.
lissalovesyou:)

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautifully written love is a funny thing. what one thinks is love may not always be

[Sonam]

Ofcourse, It can happen more than once. One should not waste their life on someone who dont even care. BTW nicely written :)

[Saddam]

THANK YOU DEAR FRIEND.... NICE TO HEAR YOU....

[just Penny]

I like to think it can happen more than once. You have written some good sentiments here in this piece. Nice poem :) Penny

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend..... it was an old thought. appreciate you dear...

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

It does not happen to me even once T_T ...

Haha, of course it can - love is absolute, it is endless! Just have hope on love and enjoy it.

[Saddam]

yeah... love is endless but I am waiting for my sweet woe(a poetry of mine). hahaha thanks...