CAN LoVE HAPPEN TWICE?

Now days, again I think of rise 

With you can love happen twice? 

When my girl left me I was in deep shock 

My life was a question and a gloom was everywhere 

Everything happiness in the world seems me unfair 

Life turn as curse and stuck 

Smile was just seemingly. 

But when I see your bloom face nice 

I started thinking can love happen twice? 

I ruined my big part 

For her, who left me alone 

For tracking her, I reach every nook and corner 

But one evening, she stopped me saying- Life is further 

And gave me this chronic pain and forlorn 

Always I wept at which I start. 

You gave me hope; this is end of my chaos 

I believe, with you, love can happen twice. 

With you, I’ll be happy 

With you, I’ll be certain in life 

For you, my life will be still autumn to spring 

For you, my heart’s string is tingling 

My life is purposeless and strife 

Make it jovial and cheery. 

For you, I can change my life’s price 

Would you think, love might be happen twice?

Reviews

[Sreenath]

i wonder you took inspiration by the book of ravinder singh "can love happen twice" just the title. this poem is mixture of emotion , i can relate to it and i think most of them in one or other juncture of life could relate to these lines because at some point of their life .this poem has raw feelings though.. mix of confusion and awkwardness together a nice piece loved reading it.. peace :)

[Saddam]

Got right friend, I take that title from the above book.
Thank you very much for stopping and reviewing this.

[Lyndy]

I love this poem. It's very beautiful! :D

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.

[Deepika]

Overall piece is too good!

"For tracking her, I reach every nook and corner
But one evening, she stopped me saying- Life is further " -- I like this part a lot.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot sweet friend.

[Skai Rain]

It can definitely happen twice. Hell, I love everyone I meet, haha! This is a lovely poem. Keep up the great work.

[Saddam]

Hope so.... Thank you so much dear friend.

[Ana B.]

I think love didn't happen twice, just continued living.....because some things we have no power on.....lovely work again :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Vanesa Markovic]

There's nothing in this whole world I'd love more, than my first love, twice.
Beautiful!
-VM

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[brezybaby3]

this is good. i like it a lot. it reminds me of the question i was asking a few short months ago, would i be lucky enough to find soul deep love a third time? or just be grateful i had it twice? so there is your answer. you really touch on a condition of the heart that crosses all languages, all cultures, all religions.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend....... I really appreciate your words.

[MomzillaNC]

Thoughtful and hopeful theme.

NOTES: Keep reading and improving that grammar

[Saddam]

I will friend. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Saddam]

your written voice has spoken that which many have thought, wondered about and left unsaid. Bravo...

[Saddam]

Awww.... so sweet of you dear. Thanks a lot.

[Anand Sehgal]

love is like the tide.., it can't really die out. Only the medium changes !
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[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.......