ROSE

Through the warren allay

And cross by the bush-

She has never delay.

 

When she, where she stop

A perfume of joy and love, spreads-

It like, a Rose, paradise had rope.

 

Naturally, she was loved by every living

Every nook and corner, she was praised-

In return, there was unlimited love for giving.

 

Always wandering, what's she looking for?

Every time perplex, hesitate and gloomy-

It seems she has deep scar.

 

One dull morning, when sun was awaking

Every where was shine but one place was left-

At one trail, folks were looking.

 

But there was dark, still and gloomy

There was no joy, scent or happiness

Rose was in deep sleepiness

And panting Nature begun to cry in agony;

Reviews

[Julie Spade]

Wow, this is an amazing poem with such passion and depth . The beginng is sweet and filled with epic romance but at the end "nature begins to cry in agony" flips the whole story around to an upsetting storyline, not to say its bad at all it is GENIUS !

[Saddam]

thanks you dear... read these review my heart is filled with tears. thanks.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I quite like this. Good job.

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well written and very interesting my friend :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Ahena MK]

good topic ... well written !!
ahena :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet for this comment.

[Penny]

Very sweet romantic piece. Thnx for sharing.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for encouraging me.

[Penny]

Well. Feelings encourage poetry but suntimes two people feel the same & it seems like one has encouraged the other. It has been my pleasure

[Saddam]

true friends will be always remain in heart aand you are such.

[Penny]

Awwwh.. tenkew.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the idea of nature begins to cry in agony as personifying her . A very rosy poem and wonderful dear poet...Pen on...:)..........

[Saddam]

Thank you sir.... I just try to understand the nature's sedule of season.
thanks a lot

[Sami Khalil]

nature's schedule of seasons ...You are welcome...:).............