ROSE

Through the warren allay

And cross by the bush-

She has never delay.

 

When she, where she stop

A perfume of joy and love, spreads-

It like, a Rose, paradise had rope.

 

Naturally, she was loved by every living

Every nook and corner, she was praised-

In return, there was unlimited love for giving.

 

Always wandering, what's she looking for?

Every time perplex, hesitate and gloomy-

It seems she has deep scar.

 

One dull morning, when sun was awaking

Every where was shine but one place was left-

At one trail, folks were looking.

 

But there was dark, still and gloomy

There was no joy, scent or happiness

Rose was in deep sleepiness

And panting Nature begun to cry in agony;

Reviews

[Julie Spade]

Wow, this is an amazing poem with such passion and depth . The beginng is sweet and filled with epic romance but at the end "nature begins to cry in agony" flips the whole story around to an upsetting storyline, not to say its bad at all it is GENIUS !

[Saddam]

thanks you dear... read these review my heart is filled with tears. thanks.

[Rachelle]

No words today…. Just this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSILj9EfIlM

[Saddam]

many thanks to you dear friend......

[Kamari's]

Such beautiful emotion in this and great poem structure I say bravo !!!

[Saddam]

thanks to you dear friend........

[Kasey Miriam]

I very moving poem. you do very well with each thing you write

[Saddam]

you are so kind dear, thanks for reading and giving time to say about.

[Ruth]

Lovely ideas here...refreshing x

[Saddam]

heartly thanks to you dear...

[Cory Barrett]

Great development of emotion.

[Saddam]

thanks to you dear friend,

[s y e]

You've got a few errors here and it needs a little bit of work but you managed to portray the emotions so very well. It was very good.

[Saddam]

can you please point out that? I will fix that as soon as possible. Thank you so much dear.

[A. Amos]

Interesting and great write, truly enjoyed the read...

[Saddam]

thank you so much dear friend.

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Frieda P]

It needs a bit of editing but it's lovely in its intended emotions Ssadd, muchly enjoyed your personification and sentiments here.

[Vandana Sharma]

Very beautifully woven and an intelligent work too.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...