ROSE

Through the warren allay

And cross by the bush-

She has never delay.

 

When she, where she stop

A perfume of joy and love, spreads-

It like, a Rose, paradise had rope.

 

Naturally, she was loved by every living

Every nook and corner, she was praised-

In return, there was unlimited love for giving.

 

Always wandering, what's she looking for?

Every time perplex, hesitate and gloomy-

It seems she has deep scar.

 

One dull morning, when sun was awaking

Every where was shine but one place was left-

At one trail, folks were looking.

 

But there was dark, still and gloomy

There was no joy, scent or happiness

Rose was in deep sleepiness

And panting Nature begun to cry in agony;

Reviews

[Julie Spade]

Wow, this is an amazing poem with such passion and depth . The beginng is sweet and filled with epic romance but at the end "nature begins to cry in agony" flips the whole story around to an upsetting storyline, not to say its bad at all it is GENIUS !

[Saddam]

thanks you dear... read these review my heart is filled with tears. thanks.

[star73]

Very nice and in depth nice once against

[EmilyBianca]

Amazing, and deep. Love it's meaning

[kublakhan27]

I read this as a metaphor for Mother Nature and how we mistreat her...we will someday run out of rope, and the perfume of joy and love will dry out, leaving darkness and an agonized cry. Many painfully beautiful pictures you've painted with your words here...a powerful and picturesque piece...great work :)

[AYVID N]

Breathtakingly beautiful poetry from you Ssadd. You always succeed in uplifting my mood with your refreshing work. Keep it up always friend.

[Khushi]

After reading any poem of yours "wow" is the word which comes to my mind. All your poems are just so beautiful.

[maria ( rose)]

A beautiful write..I think you did a marvelous job on this piece. Keep up the great work...
and I Love that Title btw ; ) Thank you for the share.xx

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, this poem is brilliant. Such a beautiful piece. :-)

Kaze~

[Saddam]

thanks dear.... so thanks to you.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Mandy Rose]

The element of nature is infused so cleanly in this poem, and it had such fire of emotion. Keep up the great work, dear!

[Saddam]

really.....unbelievable thought you have dear.... thank you very much..

[lissalovesyou]

Beautiful. This is just beautiful. Write on.
lissalovesyou:)

[Saddam]

wow... so thanks to you dear....