ROSE

Through the warren allay

And cross by the bush-

She has never delay.

 

When she, where she stop

A perfume of joy and love, spreads-

It like, a Rose, paradise had rope.

 

Naturally, she was loved by every living

Every nook and corner, she was praised-

In return, there was unlimited love for giving.

 

Always wandering, what's she looking for?

Every time perplex, hesitate and gloomy-

It seems she has deep scar.

 

One dull morning, when sun was awaking

Every where was shine but one place was left-

At one trail, folks were looking.

 

But there was dark, still and gloomy

There was no joy, scent or happiness

Rose was in deep sleepiness

And panting Nature begun to cry in agony;

Reviews

[Julie Spade]

Wow, this is an amazing poem with such passion and depth . The beginng is sweet and filled with epic romance but at the end "nature begins to cry in agony" flips the whole story around to an upsetting storyline, not to say its bad at all it is GENIUS !

[Saddam]

thanks you dear... read these review my heart is filled with tears. thanks.

[Lyndy]

Another beautiful and inspiring poem! Thanks for sharing!

[Skai Rain]

This work of yours is deep and powerful. Love it. Thanks for sharing :)

[anne]

But there was dark, still and gloomy
There was no joy, scent or happiness
Rose was in deep sleepiness
And panting Nature begun to cry in agony;...this touched my heart..an amazing one..:))

[brezybaby3]

It's got good bones, but you need to flesh it out a bit wit the grammar and flow. I
like the essence of the poem

[Chris]

I sense the emotion within this and the need to reach beyond the screen.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Sir.

[Stefanie Holmes]

This piece has beautiful passion laced through it. Great job!

~Stefanie

[Angels heart]

At some parts, to me, it didn't really flow. I like it though.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Delicate and highly descriptive, well done, good read.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

i love the imagery here, nice poeöm

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

i liked the picturesque in the beginning....but you turned out it to a sad one..
The way you presented the agony of nature is impressive..