A STRANGE SPRING

At the time I was sat under a huge tree

Its top was quite close the heaven

And its bunches, caught the clouds

Under it's around arms-

There were dreaming spring season.

 

The couples were talking

The couple of birds were singing.

 

Snow were scatter into near pond

Its charming buds, like stars

And old flowers coming on earth as autumn

Every couple enjoy this time.

 

All around of that tree was not beauty

Everywhere was desert

The earth was shining and blowing dust.

Reviews

[SAYED THANGAL]

an effective communication to nature, the rhythmic lyric. good writing

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir...

[SAYED THANGAL]

welcome dear

[Shadow of Death]

Interestn to say the least.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[costa siwale]

Lovely poetry, soothing and inspiring. Well written

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Other than the few grammar I like the poem alot and I think you have a great talent...Bravo...:)..................

[Saddam]

I think of this when I was in highschool..so error come...but thank you to highlighted them. For next time it will help. Thanks a lot sir.

[Sami Khalil]

I was sat: I sat.
Around arms : round arms
Dreaming of spring season and so forth...
read moreI was sat: I sat.
Around arms : round arms
Dreaming of spring season and so forth...
All around that


You are welcome...:)...........