I AM ALONE

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is such an emotional write, SSADD.

[Madalyn Beck]

A very emotional write. Good job! (:

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.....

[Khushi]

A very sad n beautiful poem. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[MsJewel]

You have touched my heart with this one my friend... sad and yet beautifully written.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

It is happy moment for me dear. I am much happy than you think. Thank you very much dear.

[Tina Louise UK]

Emotional piece hun, enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

There's so much emotion in this poem. Beautifully written. :-)

Kaze~

[Saddam]

I am much pleased that you like it. Thank you dear friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :-)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Love it very emotional of alone feeling , I understand that feeling sometimes, But I loved it:))))))))))))))))I learn I am not alone in times being alone for He is with me always:)

[Saddam]

Ha...Thanks dear.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Very welcome:)

[AYVID N]

A sad but beautiful piece from Ssadd! Loved it!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend. Your words are such a magic.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A beautiful and telling piece, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Elina]

What a beautiful poem Ssadd. It's beauty is one of tragedy, and you've written it so well. I quite enjoyed this.

[Saddam]

Thanks for your view dear. I feel very glad.