I AM ALONE

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.

Reviews

[audrie]

I like the metaphor of the tree - after every one is gone there is only yor and you are alone. nice piece

[Penny]

Nice comparisons you made there. This poem is short simple, yet very meaningful and heart touching. The lastjust completes the whole meaning, steal the show. Definitely your best

[Ina]

Very nice work. I loved the line "I am life's illusion".

[kublakhan27]

Life's illusion is a stunning vision, especially coming near the end of this piece...how often have I felt just like this? A lot...but I could never articulate it with the poetic precision you have here. The repetition of the title is potent as well...what can I say, this one just spoke to me...a fine work on many levels.

[William Wapi]

Nicely written, short and beautiful. Lovely work Ssadd.

[Mandy Rose]

Very realistic and hearfelt

[Kamari's]

A great emotional piece I love it ; it has the realistic view that we are in someway alone

[Kasey Miriam]

Very emiotionfull piece I like it a lot

[melissa]

This is awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Cory Barrett]

As I read through several of your poems there is some editing that could be done. But in this case i find the flaws nourishing to me the reader. Whether intentional or not, this is a beautiful write. Thank you.