I AM ALONE

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.

Reviews

[Lyndy]

A nice poem well written and it's beautiful! ^^

[Sindu]

Amazing one, this one. Shows the cracks and a peek inside.
Liked this: behalf of happiness, mourn.

[child of God]

Nice writ so true we all feel alone. Some times

[Jamestown]

Great emotional piece, thanks for sharing.

[Deepika]

I like the emotions that you've tried to pour in and the wonderful analogies (y)

[anne]

such a beautiful piece..enjoyed this one...:))

[Barbz]

I meditate to bring myself to that state. I am never alone, being everything to everybody. How I long for minutes of " life's illusion"......

[Chris]

an emotion building piece...

[MomzillaNC]

Great line: "I am life's illusion"

Very imaginative and filled with reality and emotions poured out there for all to experience..