MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[Lydia Shutter]

Free and easy....flowing words filled with romantic desire. The imagery is stunning. Lydi**

[Saddam]

thank you dear... i am glad to hear that.

[Tinfoil_Fairy]

Very beautiful imagery you are using here! The atmosphere is very light and yet sincere, which is hard to produce in combination.
I could point out that there are a few language mistakes (grammar), but I don't want to be a spoilsport :) The poem in itself is lovely and that's what's important (unless you want me to point out something, then please let me know).

[Saddam]

thanks for reading my poetry. Error may be, your suggestion will be welcomed. please point out. again thank you dear.

[Sami Khalil]

"Meet me, at that place
Where little pieces of snow every time falls
And a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice
Where easy wind never come to end. "

[My Favorite Writer !]

Very well crafted ! I can feel the love in the air..

[Saddam]

thanks dear....

[Praveeta]

Truly sensational. Nicely penned.

[Saddam]

thanks for this sensational review this. loveya.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Rida Sarwar]

very romantic and beautiful.Your introspection is something I appreciate :) keep it up :)

[Saddam]

thank you for this romantic review. love it.

[Rida Sarwar]

pleasure's mine :)

[Little Bird]

This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read, I love your use of vocabulary, and the rhythm of it all

[Saddam]

thank you very much.... i love this poetry too because i write it with my all heart for my girl.. thanks.

[Sasha]

"I want to dance with you till the last breath
I want to live with you till the end
Where desires is untied to move."

Beautiful .. !

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this. It is soft and sweet. I am slightly puzzled by the line "Between this meads" the only thing I can come up with is drinking and talking about love.

[Saddam]

thank you dear, between this meads....it means suppose there is a big beautiful garden and a tree with a big bunches, a green shadowy tree, under that tree a love being talked.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a lovely romantic poem.Sweet lines awesome images.Ithink we would all like to go to this place.Well written:)

[Saddam]

thank you dear angle....Every word are inspired me...thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww you are welcome :)