MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[janzsuico]

Lovely lines... how I wish I had experienced this moments when I was younger under that big tree with someone talking about love and just only love, not plans, enjoying the sweet talks...
this poem is indeed beautiful..

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend. I am glad that you found it relative. love you.

[La Luna]

This is by far one of my favourite romantic poems. Well done 😊

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear poet.

[La Luna]

No problem :)

[JenniferMarie]

This is the sweetest. I liked the repetition of Meet me. The poem flowed very nicely and it was full of emotion, sweetness and love. Well done.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend....

[DIVYA]

Sheer beauty expressed in each line. You deserve applause here.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend...love you.

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome! Take care. :)

[Khushi]

Its just so romantic! Especially the last lines.
I want to dance with you till the last breath
I want to live with you till the end
Where desires is untied to move.
Thanks a lot for sharing :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear. love you.

[Dhaye]

This is romantic, Ssadd. It reminds me of my college sweetheart when we used to date/meet in a particular place where only our love is what we can feel- it's the biggest acacia tree in our school. But loving at young age will really not ensure a lasting love. After our break-up, I haven't seen that tree anymore...only in my memories...during passing thoughts like this.

Nice poem.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear... but my love has passed away. And, in memory of her I write it. thanks and I am glad that you feel it. Love you.

[Dhaye]

Oh, sorry about your loss. Keep going.
You're welcome.=)

[Shaquana Adams]

This is so beautifully written! Thanks for sharing :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I want to dance with you till the last breath

This is a truly wonderful poem.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[PurpleQuartz]

A very sweet poem. It speaks or true love through beautiful imagery. Great write.

[Saddam]

Thanks.....dear friend. thank you for this sweet words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Detailed and full of beauty, the imagery makes on want to join your subjects, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thanks dear friend...thank you very much.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome x