MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[Kasey Miriam]

lovely write you have grown very much in your writing.

[Cory Barrett]

I really like the thought of untied desires. good write.

This stirred within me... I adored the ease at which you voiced this plea in written word.. I enjoyed it very much.

[Rishabh Arora]

The perfect Rendezvous :) Love is all over the air tonight :)

[Ruth]

Beautiful display of affection, this is lovely! x

[saumya]

it aptly describes how first love feels. Nice :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend......

[emmajoy]

This is the kind of poetry that makes any reviewer wish she or he had written, it's charming and sincere and talks of all those special thoughts and feelings lovers have .. or should.

' Meet me, at that place ~ where little pieces of snow every time falls ~ and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice.. ' that place is every season - just as your emotions are. Beautiful.

So romantic my friend, it's like a first love on a spring or summers day, that's in need of each other...
You share true bliss, and poetic stories, within this, I'm hungry for more, after this one, how it goes on....

Thank you for sharing.
- Elisa

[Patricia Wedel]

A beautiful poem of the beginning of
love to the lovely end where spirits
begin again. truly... Pat

[FlamingPhoenix]

"I want to dance with you till the last breath/ I want to live with you till the end"--beautiful!