MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[Derek Smith]

Really get the feeling of desire ment. I like it

[Bowers]

love is beautiful, isnt it...? a great poem, lovely write!

[EmilyBianca]

Beautiful, and creative. Liked it a lot!!!!!!

[Honey-Bee]

Wow! This is a lovely poem and sounds like a beautiful place to dance!

[Mary Steffen]

Very good!
Very creative and I love the writing!
Keep up the good work.

[Awakened Rose]

"Where desires are untied to move."

Such a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing :)

[lissalovesyou]

This...This is amazing. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. But it's added to my favs.
lissalovesyou:)

[The ArK]

A lovely poem SSADD. Each and every line of this piece is capable of filling the reader's mind with the divine feel of love. Loved it very much.

[Lorna]

You write so deeply in all of your poetry and I never fail to feel as if you are giving me a little piece of yourself.