FUSSY MAN

Once a bird was flying

In sky, deep blue sky, alone and freely

Nothing objection was there

Her wings was keen to collect the sky

Every direction was full of happiness.

She cheeps and twitters in joy

A freedom song, she always sings.

 

One day, she was plying with endless sky

Suddenly, a sound of fear came

A fussy man frantically shot her

Poor bird came down to the earth.

 

The culprit, jibed for her fly

The jealous man broke her wings

He deplume her every feather

And left her impatiently

....and poor bird got accused to death.

Reviews

[prajakta]

Its an interesting read.for me in the first part it tells about the flight of our dreams n happiness but the next second tragedy strikes..good piece.

[Nikolean]

So sad...but loving the writing style!

[AaronFreitas]

A sad write... the tale of how the bird went on minding it's own business, singing happily then all of a sudden it all ends just like that. Nice work :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Wonder what pleasure did that fussy man get after killing that bird.... good one.....

[Deepika]

Bird curtailed of its basic freedom.A sad but emotion filled piece. Good one!:)

[Jamestown]

This is a great piece, jealousy is the down fall to many unfortunately, this is a very creative
way to get that message across,thanks for sharing.

[Lyndy]

A sad but beautiful poem. It is well written! :)

[Sindu]

Jealousy and rage cloud the proper reasoning. Sad to see how it ended.

[anne]

its painful to read this one...but its beautifully sad...:))

[Matching Socks]

It's a shame when a man is attracted to a pretty woman, gets the girl and then winds up hating her for the attention her beauty attracts.