I AM BEATING the LIFE

I am beating the life 

I am repeating the life. 

A moment, which I celebrate many years ago; 

Still celebrating today and will tomorrow; 

A rack moment, at which I cry yesterday 

Still at that I weeped today; 

This is my boring life.

 

There was a love in my past;

She tried to change me,very fast; 

Many protest came on the way 

But, all of sudden, she stopped her way 

..and gave me a confusing life. 

Whenever I think of my first love; 

Tears make me blind, and burn flame in my nerve 

Sudden, decide to spoil myself 

But love, stand erect and help 

Then I comedown to carry my shoulder 

And supposing to build my folder 

This is my gloaming life.

Reviews

[Blue]

"A moment, which I celebrate many years ago;
Still celebrating today and will tomorrow;
A rack moment, at which I cry yesterday
Still at that I weeped today;
This is my boring life."

-My favorite stanza.

I call it "boring moments" but not "life". I hope you can break free from rut and take interest in the beautiful things life offers.

[Saddam]

thank you dear very much....hope so, thanks for your blessing.

[MADAM]

Very interesting, particularly like the opening lines, they have immediate impact and really capture me.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear poet.

[Saddam]

Thanks sir..... I am very pleasant to hear that. So thanks a lot.

[Sami Khalil]

"But love, stand erect and help
Then I camedown to carry my shoulder
And supposing to build my folder
This is my glooming life."

With love and hope and the will you can beat the odds...Bravo