I AM BEATING the LIFE

I am beating the life 

I am repeating the life. 

A moment, which I celebrate many years ago; 

Still celebrating today and will tomorrow; 

A rack moment, at which I cry yesterday 

Still at that I weeped today; 

This is my boring life.

 

There was a love in my past;

She tried to change me,very fast; 

Many protest came on the way 

But, all of sudden, she stopped her way 

..and gave me a confusing life. 

Whenever I think of my first love; 

Tears make me blind, and burn flame in my nerve 

Sudden, decide to spoil myself 

But love, stand erect and help 

Then I comedown to carry my shoulder 

And supposing to build my folder 

This is my gloaming life.

Reviews

[Blue]

"A moment, which I celebrate many years ago;
Still celebrating today and will tomorrow;
A rack moment, at which I cry yesterday
Still at that I weeped today;
This is my boring life."

-My favorite stanza.

I call it "boring moments" but not "life". I hope you can break free from rut and take interest in the beautiful things life offers.

[Saddam]

thank you dear very much....hope so, thanks for your blessing.

[Mikayla_Stagg]

I love this poem. Written beautifully. Love it

[Yaren]

That's a good poem! Nice :)

[Aprille]

Nicely penned SSADD, full of emotions, mostly of loneliness and longing. But as we all know, life is all about choices. We can get bored all day or we can be happy even with pain behind our eyes. Thanks for sharing such wonderful poem. :)

[Prabha Salimath]

We are not meant to do such things happen in life. I think life is about to run and catch it, what we catch let them tressure it, if it is precious. I wish everyone to treasure it; as it is, no need to mix any sorrow to it to make life confusing. Reson is unclear but in many lives I see unsolvable reason to detach themselves from their love, even after that they found new love. Run with life keep the devil busy no moment you find boring.

[Anand Sehgal]

Still celebrating today and will tomorrow;

you captured it very efficiently and effectively. well done :)
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[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Many times, I have thought about how my life has become a bore--but if I take a moment to reflect on it--it is not that bad at all.
The bad moments tend to overshadow the happy ones--if you let it.
Here, you have captured this and how love gone bad can be a negative force in your life.
Celebrate a new year and make it count.
Nice work.

[Matching Socks]

It's easy to get stuck in a rut and get bored with our lives, but it's also an opportunity to re-evaluate and set a new course. Nicely done. :)

[child of God]

Good Poem very deep life is boring sometimes

[hardeep sabharwal]

Life is as boring as you feel it, as happy as u want it, and as sad as u feel,, it is as u want to see,, it is never the same it changes,,
As far as the work, it is well written and well conveyed,, thank you

[Ruth]

Life is a process of gatherings and dealings...it seems, at times...finding inner calm and peace is a trial, beautifully done hon xo