Life

Life is work, life is empty 

 Life is create, life is destiny 

 Life is dust, life is proud 

 Life is neither but life is good 

 Life is power and other hand 

Life is pity or mercy 

That all can't change by source 

 It is the true fact of life's world 

 And it will be do must.

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

wonderful job writting this. wonderful poem

[Honey-Bee]

The only thing worth fighting for is life. Life is create, life is destiny...I like this line the most because it says life is create. I have always found it fascinating with people who create weather it be a rocket scientist, a poet or a women who can knit a hat for her family. Creating makes life continue and is a type of destiny. Thanks for sharing!

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Its great that you chose to wrie a poem about life. Not many people would approach it. But its a great poem, describes life perfectly :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear....

[SAYED THANGAL]

the real image of life is well depicted in the poem

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir for you compliments.

[Khushi]

U said that this was your first poem. When did you write it? Some words mean something different for everyone. Life is almost everything, so describing it is very difficult. Something you did very well. A very beautiful poem :)

[Saddam]

I write it when I was in my 6th standard. For me it is very special.

[Julie Spade]

Profounding piece ! Thank you for the request once again i enjoy reading your world!

[Saddam]

I'm very much glad and gratitude of all you. thanks dear, your comment is very special for my writing.

[star73]

I love it its a great poem about life=)

[Saddam]

thank you dear. I'm very much glad and gratitude of all you. thanks

[Saddam]

THIS WAS MY FIRST POETRY.... AND I LOVED IT MORE THAN OTHER.