Life

Life is work, life is empty 

 Life is create, life is destiny 

 Life is dust, life is proud 

 Life is neither but life is good 

 Life is power and other hand 

Life is pity or mercy 

That all can't change by source 

 It is the true fact of life's world 

 And it will be do must.

Reviews

[EmilyBianca]

Life is hellish as well. Nice write.

[Derek Smith]

I like that. At first I wasn't really digging it but then at then at the end it got me. I like it good write

[Ruth]

We all need to invent ourselves, makes the days more bearable, lovely write x

[Rachelle]

Figure out who we are and what we want then pursue that course into our destinies….
The thing is that many can't even sit down to figure out who they are in the first place.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Really nice poem Ssaad ,Very true words you have penned :)

[The ArK]

WELL DONE SSADD!
Really great poem. I love the way u wrote this one.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Nice one my friend .... what else can life be, if not all this?

[lissalovesyou]

Lovely, lovely write. Keep it up!
lissalovesyou:)

[Piper]

A beautiful poem! Good job!

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a really great poem.