Tortured Sorrow

It is what it is

Your pain is beautiful
I love it when you hurt
Your screams
Your cries
Whatever you do...
Don't die

Body mangled and battered
All your hopes and dreams now shattered
It makes me love you forever

You family ties now severed
Cries are useless
You body Mal-nourished
I'll help you through this

I feed you scraps of metal
It's all you'll get
I'll hook you up to an IV
Let the poison slowly drip

My will is your way
You'll surrender to what I say
My eyes roll back
Such a beautiful day

A kiss from a blowtorch
It burns and scars
Even through all the damage
It doesn't dent how beautiful you are

I can't stop my feelings
I can't help myself
As Puss manifests
You no longer feel upset

The cries cease
You're still alive
I stop the torture
Look deep in your eyes

Is this just a dream
Is there hidden meaning
Is there something to these words
Beyond darkness and bleeding

The scars start to fade
A smile becomes complete
I grab my gun
Now You're just a piece of meat

But are you really
Is there something more
You had so much meaning
My heart is now torn

I ache for vengeance
Yearning for pain
I grab my wrist
To never feel again

Reviews

[Delia]

wow this is surely one of your most strong poems. I approve!

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is so painful!! =( but written beautifully.. the feelings are deep.. and so full of love. Everything's wrapped in bittersweet honey..
I loved it though. I enjoyed the read. =) Nice work!!