In My Darkest Hour

An idea I had about Hell.

In my darkest state

A light flickers

Even though I no longer see

I feel your presence

Its this presence that allows me to breathe

Why I continue to exist

I feel around my cell only to discover shards of glass

At my feet, snakes consume the floor

The hissing is deafening

I cover my ears to no avail

Then I hear your voice clearly for the first time

The most beautiful voice I've ever heard

It is with this voice that I beg for forgiveness

It is with this voice that I plead my case....

It is with this voice that condemns me

From such a seductive call to frightening laughter

The growling of demons fill the air

With the shedding of tears 

The nightmare begins

Author's Note

I have never submitted my poetry for review before.
I apologize for poor grammar, and any other errors my writing may contain.

Because I've been getting positive feedback from the few people I've shown my poetry to, I was curious how they'd do online.

Thanks for reading and I very much appreciate it!

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

It is okay, it shows what you're going through in life. Nicely written too, don't be afraid of other people's opinions, as it is only a choice you can make to either follow them or now. and I don't think many people here are gonna rage at a poem, I assure you. Keep Writing! This is nicely done!