Brave Young Man ..

Under the ground :-

 

Hey Thomas Come Here, Do You Hear Me I'm Under This.

Hey Thomas, Stop Joking Around !! I Feel Like I'm Lying On The Ground ?!

Hey Guys.. It's Not Cool Get Me Out ! I Feel Like A Fool.

Oh My I Can't Reach Your Hands ! Come Closer I'm Bearly Breathing Now!!

The Pulse Is Stopping I Can Feel My Heart, Don't Let Me Drown More Than I Am!!

Whatever Happened Aren't We Friends ? Get Me Out Of This Crap..

You Think By Playing Dirty You Always Win Heeeeyyy !!!!!!!!!!

I'm Screaming Now why, don't you hear me ?!

Thomas, Fred, Sofy Guyyyss ..

 

On The Ground :-

 

Sofy Cries Out Loud, My Beloved Henry is gone now. fredrek's patting sofy's back

thomas dying from heartattack ! actually following henry's track.

all the people has gone now and the fanural is ending now say good bye for henry

he's resting peacfully under the ground.

They never thought henry's back so they left him weeping out loud..

Facing Fears And Deadly Vesions..

henry's alive don't u get it Till Now ?! but now he's died from being under ground

So Another Fanural Should Be Held For His Braveness I Guess ..

Rest In Peace Little Brave Soldier.

Never WillWe Forget About You !!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh my, how scary! There's frightening pace in the first part, found it beckoned me into the awful happening.. but then, oh my, you got careless again with spelling and all in the second part, Did you check it? Your idea deserves some better editing .. don't alter the pace, or the bulk of the post, but respect it more. See to punctuation, spelling, etc., please. Frederick, funeral, etc.

[Rajwa]

He Had The Life, But Not The Luck.