2012 Our Last Train..

This is The Last Year With My Friends We've Shared So Many Memorise Together And Now This Is Our Last Semester !!

The Smoke Came Out I Bearly Saw It..

My Friends, Our Last Trip Togather Stats Now..

We've Rode The Same Train For 12 Years Till Now..

This Is Our Last Journey Together..

The Smoke Streams The Train's Near..

Pack Your Luggage We're Departing..

To The Different Destenations We Go..

We Share So Many Dreams Though..

My Heart Is Aching For Your Gowth..

I Can't Believe Our Last Days Came..

Forgetting All The Bad Times We Rode The Train..

Waving For Whom Lost Our Way..

Or For Whom Waked Late For Tickets..

Our Last Journey Stats Today..

With All Of You My Tears is Flying And The Wind Blow..

From Face To Face Tears Are Landing..

B.bye Childhood Friends Has Grown..

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is such a special write, such a special time to remember. Tis sad when life alters, friends go different ways, but, of course, if everyone tries to keep in touch, it'll happen. I have friends from primary school and i just might be old enough to be your mum - just!

Anyway love, once more your idea is first class and you've really stretched yourself. However, again, you've not bothered about spelling .. do check it before you post. I can't ask my friends to come read you if you're still being careless. You deserve many more reviews, you have brilliant ideas but ..

[Maria.F.T]

I love it so much ! The metaphor and the style..they're so outstanding ! Anyway...everything that is written in this poem could be possible..