Painful Rain Drops ..

Actually I Believed In Thaose Drops For You're Delay..

Actually I Though I Heard The Thundres Screams..

Actually My Love Made The Lie Seem So Real..

For The Day Delay Waiting Down The Way..

I Thought My Heart Was Stolen And I Waited For My Prey..

For You To Lie In That Way Actually I'm The The Trump Card..

In Exchange For My Heart You Gave Me Sweet Little Lies..

Cause That Day Was Sunny And Hot I Thought I Stepped In Hell..

Not Even One Dark Cloud I Heard The Thundres Cry..

But Actually That Was My Heart Swining From Your Bracelets Chain..

Cause The Second I Heard The Sound Your Shadow Appeared ..

Now, With Your Little Dreamy Hand Holding Onto Maily's I Drowned..

Isn't It Sweet my Heart Strangled In Your Arms..

Reviews

[ChaoticSoul]

Very interesting and captivating imagery. A few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major. I think you have a great artistic vision. Nice ideas!

[Emma Cathryn]

Deep! I love the emotion. Keep at it! (:

[emmajoy]

Hmmmmmm .. there's sad, sad feeling here - whether fiction or fact I don't know, guess it doesn't matter, plus, you've created some fine phrases, especially that last line. But oh my, the spelling and punctuation! You already know I'll help if I can, if and when you want.

Happy weekend. :)

[Rajwa]

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