Written By A "Kid"

Wrote this after being ripped on for being a "kid". Maturity was far from present in my analyst.

So I'm a child?
Does this mean I am lacking any skill?
Should you demean me and degrade me?

Crushing my drive at your own will?
Am I a lesser being?
Are my actions juvenile?
Is that why you disrespect me?
Is it I who's in denial?

See, I think you've got it backwards,
You're the child in this tale.
You thrive off the pain of others,
You show no pity for the frail.
Respect is something earned,
It is not a given right.
I hope the harsh words of this child,
Will help him sleep tonight.

Author's Note

Doesn't make sense, generally horrible. Thank you very much for reading!

Reviews

[Richard Man]

No, I know exactly where you are coming from on this one. Mutual time for each, a game of table tennis ping-pong. It is no point playing a game if one player has perfected the art of spinning and serving at break neck speed and the other has just learned to play. Winning is not going to impress anyone. Losing will depress, however. The better player should allow himself the joy of learning to play with his left hand so a game is a challenge for both. You have a brain, a soul, a heart you have the right to express your thoughts, your feelings and your emotions but you need still to play the game. Match point!

[}Echo{]

I really like this, and I know what your coming from. Maturity really has nothing to do with age, but how you act and what you do. I really like this one. Nice write. :)

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Ah, powerful. Quite powerful.
Maturity is a relative thing, and sometimes the older you get, the less you understand. And I love how you switch things around in the second stanza, and give examples on why the other person is the child, and not you. That shows maturity, my friend. Excellent write, and quite mature. Not childlike at all. :)

[revalatia]

eerie and downright catchy! ... freakin like this one a lot dude

[Sacha Davison]

I'm glad you liked it!

[quinfinn]

a very good write. and...i wasn't being disrespectful when i wrote the words "only a teenager", in fact, i meant it as a compliment. you definitely have a gift.

[Sacha Davison]

This was written long before your review had been crafted! I thank you for the compliments! I'll be sure to check some of your work out today!

[Dayran]

Way to go kid.

[Sacha Davison]

This review made me smile, aha!

[Frieda P]

Wow, what a great read, sometimes the adult is not so smart. We don't see what's right in front of our eyes since we've been jaded by life. Seeing life through younger eyes has it's benefits. I love this. :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

Ouch!! LOL I feel exactly the same when people say that kids aren't able to be good authors because they're underage. Not true, that. I'm technically an "underaged author".
Can I print this out and show it to those who diss the kids of the world? Please?
This is just what the adults need: A new perspective!
Keep up the EPIC work!

[Sacha Davison]

Well thank you very much! I'm quite honored by your review! You may certainly print out my work, thank you very much for taking such a shine to it! Anything I've posted is welcome to be spread throughout this realm we all share.

[KeeD]

This is really well written, I like the message it portrays from the get go to the finish.
For the children are our future and they inspire us, they will inspire history and be the wind of change. Such a good write. Inspirational.