Breakdown

Breakdown

A Poem by Lala

Lately I've been going through a storm
The kind you cannot shelter from
It's a hurricane from within
No umbrella to shield me from the rain
When all I do is keep others dry
When their soul cries I'm there
Providing my shoulders as a resting place
For them I'll always be strong
But lately my own mind is feeling too heavy
Wishing this bad weather would pass along
I'll always hold someone's burdens
Carry them around with love
Yet lately I lack the power to carry myself
I'll always build someone up when they're down
But now my hands are too sore
To pick myself up from the ground

© 2021 Lala


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Sometimes we are so strong for others that we forget that it is okay to have moments of weakness for ourselves, to let ourselves feel our emotions inside. A internal storm that seems to be getting more dangerous but if we allow ourselves to feel, then eventually things will get better. Thanks for sharing!

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Sometimes we are so strong for others that we forget that it is okay to have moments of weakness for ourselves, to let ourselves feel our emotions inside. A internal storm that seems to be getting more dangerous but if we allow ourselves to feel, then eventually things will get better. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. I can definitely relate to this Sometimes we get so caught up in helping others that we forget to take good care of ourselves. Great work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lala

3 Years Ago

Thank you! And I hope you'll be able to pick yourself up from the ground eventually as well ♥
Hello, Sabi! :)
You seem exhausted. I hope your troubles get sorted. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lala

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your response! I hope they'll get sorted too, but time heals doesn't it? And in the me.. read more

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