Light Years

Light Years

A Poem by Lala

We're like stars darling
We can see each other 
Feels like we're close
When in reality
You're light years away from me

© 2019 Lala


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What we have here is failure to communicate.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but very sweet, very well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At least you can share the same sky. Nice to meet you, Sabine!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lala

5 Years Ago

I love that thought! That could be such a good addition to the poem haha, wish I thought of that mys.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

5 Years Ago

I'd say go for it! ; )

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Added on July 10, 2019
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Lala
Lala

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Welcome to my page! I know we're all writers here, but if you like my writing and are interested in me writing something for you, just hit me up! I do freelance poetry writing and it truly makes me.. more..

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