We Don't Rhyme

My ears love writing that flows

So it's those poems I try to compose

I make them rhyme every time

All of them have a certain order

Like I'm a hoarder of structure

And I'm able to ponder

But can't let my words wander

So all my pieces are a rhyming sculpture 

I struggle to write anything other

But what I can't organize

What I have no control over

Since I'm not the sole composer 

The one thing I can't force to rhyme

Is you and me

[Even when I wish we could be]

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

You are blessed with a poetic soul!
Your poems really inspire me!
You write from passion, love and truth.

I'd encourage you to keep writing and dating each poem to keep on building a poetry portfolio you can one day publish worldwide. The world is waiting to read words like yours.
Poetry is a divine gift from Our Creator, and you have it in abundance.

Well done!

[T.S. Sky]

I like it a lot. Well written.

[Chris Shaw]

I love rhyme and meter. I especially like internal rhyme and you have used that as well in this little verse. Yes, sometimes we don't hit the right notes with those we would prefer to. Forced rhyme is bad. It has to sound natural. :)

[Robert Trakofler]

a rhyme crime? or a grand design? you'll know for certain in time! I love rhythm and rhyme too, that's not to say i don't appreciate a good bit of prose I just feel sorta naked when i try to write that way. I enjoy your compose and flow very much in this write will have to read more of you. Perhaps you might have to settle for some prose regarding your write partner:)

[Wild Rose]

I dont aim to rhyme
I try to describe
The vision comes in my head
I have to describe that vision before it fades away into the ether world
Once vaporised it is gone

[Wesley Dingler]

I understand completely. I have only written one or two free-verse poems because all of my poetry (when I wrote poetry) wanted to be "rhyme sculptures." A truly elegant phrase, my friend. There is so much soul about this verse that reminds me of how trying it was having words and sentences constantly battling around my brain.

Thank you for sharing.

[Sherriff]

A sonnet to seranade the beauty of rhyme, I found this immensely appealing. A well crafted well worded peice, thank you for sharing.