Pen And Pencil

Pen And Pencil

A Poem by Lala

My love for you
Was written with ink
Your love for me
Was written in pencil

No matter how much 
I tried crossing it out
Even when it was defaced
I could still feel the love
Whilst your love for me
Could easily be erased

© 2019 Lala


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Interesting metaphor for an unequal relationship. Sounds like it's over but the pain is still there.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Added on March 28, 2019
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Lala
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