Would You?

If you saw me the way I see myself

Would you still love nobody else? 

If you felt the feelings I feel

Would it still be my heart you want to steal?

Reviews

[KurKota]

I have read the last 5 on the list of your writings. I like them all. They seem to be well written, using formats that are somewhat reminiscent of traditional poem writing structure. So many of the writers seem to not put forth any effort toward poetic structure and disciplines, and are just free flowing of structure and wording that frankly are just ramblings, not poetry.

I like your writings....keep up the effort...it is definitely worthy!

[Lala]

Thank you for your insights! You're very perceptive about the formats, which I tend to apply in my poetry because it feels more organized to me which calms my mind haha. Hence why I couldn't even really write free flowing structures if I wanted to. But I'm glad you like it and told me your views, it made my day :)

[KurKota]

You are welcome....I agree as I am very much the same. Perhaps that is at least partially why I recognized the patten. Howwever, I think you have a true poetic sensitivity and you will derive and give much benefit by sharing it.