What You Did

I don't know what was worse

You breaking my heart

Or stealing my dreams

Because one stopped me from feeling

But the other kept me from sleeping

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

You write such powerful emotions, statements, truthful observations and sincere declarations in such short space.
This is your strength.
You have a sharp poetic sight, you poetic soul.


Well done

[Rye]

Love this write, So nicely written. I think both feelings hurt just about the same.

[Lala]

I think (unfortunately) you're right ♥

[John the Baptist]

Romantic love seems to build us up and then pull the rug out from under us. Friendships are a lot less trouble.