Love Effort

Love Effort

A Poem by Lala

We want to know love and love to know us
It is a topic we often discuss
It is supposed to be unconditional
But it has turned into something traditional
Something taken for granted
Instead of always feeling enchanted
Shocked when their love is dying
But that's because people stop trying
Their love starts to become static
Instead of feeling like magic
So I wonder how love will truly be for me
If it will branch out and grow like a tree
Will it develop and always be redefined
Will you remain interested in the depths of my mind
When we have disagreements and disputes
Will you still remember my positive attributes
I hope you will always put in effort to retrace
Why you fell in love with me in the first place
We don't have to love each other every single day
I just hope you won't allow our love to ever slip away

© 2017 Lala


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You make rhyme look simple, and yet what you produce is clever and so very apt. (same comment for some of your other pieces which I have also read)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lala

7 Years Ago

This is a compliment I have never received before but it is quite meaningful, to me at least haha. I.. read more
I loved the flow and rhythm and the message it conveys. Not to stop trying. I really liked this.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 30, 2017
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Lala
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