Ironic Euphoria

All things you said to me
Could have made me a better person
Or was it made me a bitter person
Well you know I’m not sure anymore
Cause they tell you to get past it
To accept what life throws at you
When life gives you lemons make lemonade
But I’m too busy squeezing them over my open wounds

So give me my chance to forget the mundane
To reach a novel goal, something innovative
But what do you mean it’ll be even harder
Maybe I’ll stay here, and someone will reach for me
So it dawned upon me, a new day
But somehow I can’t forget the last
Maybe if I open my eyes again
No, no more looking to the sun
Cause it may just be my burning retinas
Or my dying pride
But I’m ready
To let go
Of YOU
Now and forever
Dearest Mother of mine

Reviews

[Alyssa Dufresne]

OMG LOVE IT

now for the rest of you who probably have no clue...i HATE my mother...pretty much 24/7
yeah we have our nice moments, but that's only cause we're human and no one is looking

love the last lines the most

But I�m ready
To let go
Of YOU
Now and forever
Dearest Mother of mine


[can i please put this poem in my book?]

[Vanessa Pang *aka* Ness..]

WOW! unless a better poem comes along i think this will be the winner. =)
i exspecially LOVE the ending. great twist.

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

Harsh...everybody hates their mother every once and a while...but this took it to a whole 'nother level.

[Goodbyeguilt]

Ooo venom be fucked.
I thought 'who fucked her over?' thinking it was a friend...such harsh words about your mother, nicely done though. I really like this piece.

Well done.

GBG - Leah