Trust

The reason I can't trust you with my heart
Is because my heart was once broken
Completely shattered into pieces
This heart is a puzzle piece set
That I'm still trying to put it back together 
But I can't find the missing pieces
So until then i guess you're never going figure me out

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing. I like your whole wording. Keep writing!
Do you read mine to Anguish and She!

[trainwreck]

this was very good, but it could be longer.

[Jazique]

Awe so sad and so true for when someone else breaks your heart their time that goes by until you're able to let someone enter again and sometimes until you find yourself can you let someone truly know you again or even the new you. Well done with writing this simple short poem of truth when it comes to trust at times. Keep up the writing.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice, and i love the sort or twist at the end:
"That I'm still trying to put it back together
But I can't find the missing pieces
So until then i guess you're never going figure me out"
... so much said and honest heart in this write, and so good, loved it.

[Tasha]

I loved this! It was sad but it held so much depth. I liked the comparison to a puzzle piece set. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra