Love Painfully

The impact of falling for you was tragic,

I mean, you sent two suicide bombers 

crashing into my lungs, causing them 

to collapse like the World Trade Center,

You took my breath away, You strapped 

C4 to butterflies and shoved them down 

my esophagus, and as they sat at the pit

 of my stomach, they then exploded into 

more f*****g butterflies, and without my 

permission you dug a scalpel down the center 

of my chest, pride open my ribcage and snatched

the only thing that already belongs to you.

Author's Note

I haven't been on here in forever!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow. Well you wrote a a lot of emotional pain within this, very powerful too. The descriptions of explosives within this poem show that the amount of pain is huge. Nice one.

[Adam M. Snow]

Defiantly a deep poem, keep on writing. Nice to see you back.