Rainbow in my cloud

When I close my eyes and remember you,

You are the sunshine in my cloud.

Your modulated voice melts away my sadness and fear,

Reflecting a bridge of magical colors,

That fills my heart with love and joy,

You are the rainbow in my cloud.

 

When your eyes look at me the way they do,

You are the sunshine in my cloud.

The fleer smile on your lips fades away my loneliness and tears

Giving colors to my empty canvas,

That fills my life with endless dreams

You are the rainbow in my cloud.

Author's Note

its my first ever try on writing.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This love poem, as your first poem here, shows a lot of promise in you as a poet. You clearly have things to say.

Since you say that you have a keen interest in poetry, I'd like to help you with tips on rhythm, rhyme, imagery, repetition, simile, metaphor... and more, if you want.
We are here to help each other grow.

WELL DONE