Childhood

It's deeply related to our innocenthood or childhood and the diff stages in our life that we face.

I remember the days of my childhood
Where I had the eraser to erase the mistake I do

Innocence was the best part of that time
Which reflected in eyes
Didn't know the meaning of Truth or lies
always had smile on the lips and,
the heart was full of joy and Glee
I never thought I would have such a
difficult part in my life but today just see

I know the meaning of world,
of cruel and of jealousy
people have no time just to stand and see
everybody busy in their own so-called responsibilities

I would never wanted to be big
if I knew that
when I would be big
the only thing I had to see it
cruelty and jealousy.

Author's Note

Pls ignore the grammer problems and don't forget to write what u felt after reading this poem.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Childhood is indeed the best part in ones life. When we are little, we want to grow up soon and once we do we realise it was good when we were kid.

[Neal S]

This is a nice piece. If only we could go back to that childhood innocence. The world would be a much better place :) Nice work

[Love yourself]

I totally agree!

[Heavenswriter]

I love This Story of Childhood Amazing story of understanding of Coming of Age

[Love yourself]

Thanks alot !

[TravyQuotes]

nice. i agree everyone today is out to fulfill their own selfish agendas

[Love yourself]

Yes!!and TY

[Bala Gorthi]

Very nice observation about today's world and the grown up's behaviour.. I liked the eraser part of your poem. Yes, we all could erase our mistakes and forget many small issues easily..
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[Love yourself]

Sure!! And thanks