Depressed

Depressed

A Poem by Lokesh

The atmosphere is gray
And slowly turns into dark.
On the horizon fades the ray
And I can hear the hellhounds bark.
Fear circles my heart frail.
And I desperately search an out-going trail.
But unsuccess grows the fear
And myself into pieces I want to tear.

Till today have I been lucky,
Have always come out of this trap deathly.
But luck can run out.
On the longevity of my life I have a doubt.

-Lokesh

© 2013 Lokesh


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Good description of depression. Hard to find reason to keep going and have reason for luck and chance.
"But unsuccess grows the fear
And myself into pieces I want to tear."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


If you ever need a friend I am here =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Lokesh
Lokesh

Kathmandu, Nepal



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I am Lokesh Gurung, a nineteen-year old aspiring writer(poet, essayist, short-story writer, novelist) from Kathmandu, Nepal. more..

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