Somewhere, Someone

Somewhere in the crowd.

Someone is there,

Whose heart will beat for me, 

Whose mind will think of me.

I need to find her, 

Make her mine

And lead a love life.

But till then,

I need to cope with loneliness

And stop myself from

Descending into insanity.

-Lokesh

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh my gosh, I think that this is the most adorable poem that I have read in awhile. It made me smile. I have always wondered who God destined me to be with. Is it someone I see each and every single day? Or is it someone that I haven't even seen a day in my whole entire life? Questions that won't be answered until the day it actually happens. I love that you have patience in finding the right girl for you, instead of going after every girl and having too many break-ups to even count and remember. Break-ups sometimes can ruin a person and their fragile hurting heart. I agree with Coyote that when we rush, we could make mistakes. I think that is what happened with me with the last boyfriend. I rushed to saying 'I love you' and stuff, but after awhile I realized I didn't any longer say it because I meant it. That's when I decided to end it. I didn't want to hurt him any longer, even though he was hurting me more by saying he didn't necessarily mean those words anymore either. It hurts hearing it back! Great write. It holds a message of life: With patience, so comes your luck.

"Someone is there,
Whose heart will beat for me,
Whose mind will think of me." --Aww :')

I'm saving this poem to my library in my favorites, where it belongs. So lovely!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[RG]

Somewhere, someone!
Love the choice of title.A wonderful start as well!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have patience with love. When we rush. Could make mistakes. I like the thoughts and hope in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Aww. I hope you find whoever you are looking for.