that damsel in designer-made dress

her smiles, her talks
her nature, her body
have made a space
in my heart, in my mind
every day i spend a good time
thinking about her
and if a day goes out
without seeing her,
i feel that day
is not a day at all

but she is not my girlfriend
i haven't proposed her
and i don't think i will
thinking of saying what i feel for her
makes me afraid
and makes me imagine
the rejection
and i don't even have courage
to say what i feel for her
for she lives up in a mountain of riches
and i, in a foothill

-Lokesh

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the logic of the poem. Sometime good to know there is separation and different in lifestyle and goals. I like the ending a lot.
"for she lives up in a mountain of riches
and i, in a foothill"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[RG]

Grammatically i feel it should have been
" The thought of saying..."

Apart from that ,a Great write!Though i feel there is something missing . May be you could add a line more after
"makes me afraid
and makes me imagine
the rejection..."

Keep writing :)

[MandaBear]

This is a sweet poem. I really liked this. I hope one day you get to tell this girl how you feel and I hope she feels the same way back. =) Great job 100%