Graffiti

Graffiti

A Poem by shawnt5604

my words spray
like an exploding can of paint
i make graffiti today

 

with my thoughts the creativity flows
what I'll think of next
who knows

 

feels so great
finally speaking my mind
starting to get a grip
on these new times

 

i stand up tall
and speak my word
with this pen
it gets absurd
crazy like a man on the mic losing the beat
i pick it up
and now I teach
you all what was going through my mind
all along

 

this feeling
its ecsatic
starting to realize
I'm not bad at it

 

keep it going
i think I like it
open minded
good timing
enjoying how my thoughts
are now rhyming
just let it go...


this was a life
i once hated
took being reborn
to learn how to shape it

 

into what I know today
as I love it
couldn't see me as everything I wanted to be
when I already was it

 

materialistic
forget about it
faith and love
stand up and shout it

 

doesn't take much
to keep a content man happy
but it would take luck
to impress a rich man
sadly

 

so I'll take this life
and put it on my own pedistol
like a theif I stole
the happiness from my own sadness
I scroll
through everything I've written throughout the years
so many tears
on old peices of paper
so glad I learned
to wipe them off later
I rejoice
that I learned the sound of my own voice
I'm my own number one
like a man teaching his son-
stay positive
you can do this
don't loose it
keep going
now you're showing
the true person inside

 

feeling like an artist
I paint graffiti
learning to always love
being me

© 2014 shawnt5604


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This was wonderful. I personally find it very hard for me to write something that rhymes AND has purpose. You were able to accomplish that. This piece had great imagery and flow as well. I feel that were you broke your stanzas was well thought out. That really makes a difference when you are writing poetry.

Anyways, I agree. Stay positive. Great job. :) Question, have you gone to school for writing or is this all natural?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

very cool :) psychology is a huge interest of mine!
Ashheart

10 Years Ago

Awesome :P I just started a month ago, so I get fun gen ed courses :P
shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

icic :P ......................



Reviews

This was wonderful. I personally find it very hard for me to write something that rhymes AND has purpose. You were able to accomplish that. This piece had great imagery and flow as well. I feel that were you broke your stanzas was well thought out. That really makes a difference when you are writing poetry.

Anyways, I agree. Stay positive. Great job. :) Question, have you gone to school for writing or is this all natural?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

very cool :) psychology is a huge interest of mine!
Ashheart

10 Years Ago

Awesome :P I just started a month ago, so I get fun gen ed courses :P
shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

icic :P ......................
I am sure I wrote a review for this poem .Where did it go ?Anyways great one lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


The title is well chosen. I like the following lines

with my thoughts the creativity flows
what I'll think of next
who knows

Posted 10 Years Ago


shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

thank you so much! much appreciated
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on January 2, 2014
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shawnt5604
shawnt5604

New Lexington, OH



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Long- time writer and author of two books of poetry: My Heart Bleeds Ink and Embrace The Rain. more..

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