feeling the night

feeling the night

A Poem by shawnt5604

i feel
the aura in the air tonight
it's one of those kind of nights
when we know we're going to do something extravegant

 

a sense in our being
that might have a touch of bad intent
but so smooth is our wrecklesness
as we just go with it

 

not a care in the world
taking this world's spin for a swirl
wrapping our minds around it
and we do not quit
because something so euphoric
has to be legit

 

at least we tell ourselves that
as we go on our spree
feeling like tonight
nothing can stop me

 

I say one last prayer
not with a cry but with a stare
pointed straight forward
to this world
as I know I own this moment
tonight

© 2014 shawnt5604


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A great write. Very emotive. "Extravagant" is the only flaw unless there is a reason you used an E

Posted 10 Years Ago


shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

thank you as always :P ..............................
I love this, i feel like it goes great with the new year's sensations as well :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shawnt5604

10 Years Ago

tHANK yOU! ................................

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shawnt5604
shawnt5604

New Lexington, OH



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Long- time writer and author of two books of poetry: My Heart Bleeds Ink and Embrace The Rain. more..

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