garden full of roses

a garden full of roses
might have a thousand thorns
still the wise man only mourns
when a petal is torn

 

every stick and prick
it takes to hold up a rose
is worth every second
of enjoying the beauty it beholds

 

and one day that rose will wilter
but surely you won't forget
the true beauty inside
the same as when you first met

Reviews

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

This is what they mean when a little says a lot! Nice body and form! I like it very much!

[shawnt5604]

and I almost threw this one away lol thank you, glad I decided to keep it!

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

DON'T EVER THROW YOUR WORK AWAY!! Understand that much! We are to critical of our own work to be doing that!