Amor Women of Liberty

America is a beautiful strong women of liberty that is being won by a lover.

The invitations have been sent.

The nations have observed.

America great powerful women of liberty,
adorned with beauty, now won over as a lover.

Those of Spanish descent have
    courted her with hard work
    and much family love.

Her heart now is melting
    Amor Al Español

     now echoes in the chambers.

Her love has been spread open wide

     and hope enthrals itself
    with many children being born.

For the blessing of all have they come.

The marriage of liberty has begun.

 

Copyright Rhea Crosley 07/20/2008

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

Ah the great melting pot we call home. Loved the spanish. This poem is a great tribute to what we seem to take for granted...freedom. With so many people losing their lives around the world in countries where a bag of rice would feed a village for a week , we can sometimes lose sight of how good we really have it . Long live liberty!

Mr. Lopez

[Yvette Shaw]

Well written, very expressive and real.Good write.

Yvette

[Gandré]

This is another poem, as one reads those days...about America.
Very nice allegory here, yes. The giving America, the loving one now. I like it, of course thinking about the fact, what America gave Germany after WW2. My favorite line was "The marriage of liberty has begun." This is positive and uplifiting and loving piece of beautiful poetry.

[Legion]

Mucho mas better. :) Love it.

[Legion]

I like the point you are making here. Am wondering though with its structure if English is a second language to you?