Poetry love

Poetry love

A Poem by RHEA CROSLEY
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The wonder and magnificence of the poem and the poets.

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I get so much out of poetry so fast.
No other writing can give me so quick, so much that lasts.

Maybe that is why God and gods speak poetically.
Nothing else can bring heart and mind and soul selectively.

Poetry explodes my heart while guiding my mind.
It is beautiful, amazing, huge and is spirit lined.

What a wonderful world of falling in love with words.
It takes my heart to deeper places, to other worlds.

And I share it with my wonder beings, that Know it.
These  wonderful people graced with the title poet.

Oh feel me shiver with love and joy I share.
Dare share, with people I have never seen, of whom  I care.

Poetry moves mountains, changes hearts and can settle a soul.
Magnificent words that uncover real truth and real meaning.

May everyone learn lines of wonder.
Lines of truth, a spirit and soul asunder.

© 2008 RHEA CROSLEY


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Poems about poetry are always fascinating to read, and you did the subject justice. I think, however, it would flow smoother if you punched up your punctuation a little; don't be afraid to use commas or any other punctuation marks - the short sentences in the poem make it seem choppy, and that really messes with your poem's flow. Also, you should take the apostrophe out of the word "gods"; I assume because it's not capitalized you're referring to plural gods, in which case the apostrophe is unnecessary.

Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Just a most wonderful write here enjoyed this....Kim

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Kal
what a beautiful poem...
that is true, words move mountains and change hearts cuz when we use strong beautiful words, they can do all that...
beautiful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'll not disagree. A mind that always tries to see the beauty and emotion in life can't be a bad thing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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And he paints a picture within a picture of an artist painting a picture. Poetry for poetry. A wonderful idea with a soothing after affect. I liked how you recognize and acknowledge your friends and reviewers within the piece that they/we will be reading. Clever, creative , smooth and just plain beautiful.
Thanks Rhea.

Mr. Lopez

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is a relaxing read. Calming to my soul your soothing words of caring, hope and explanantion. I was intrigued by the words you have chosen so carefully.
"Oh feel my shiver with love and joy I share
Dare share with people I have never seen or of whom I care"
are truly heartfelt lines.
I like this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is very true.. Poetry can be such a release for all kinds of people..

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Very true poetry for me is a release for anger happiness and joy every emotion for me i can express with words like a painter to his/her paint :)
Well written x

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on July 15, 2008
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RHEA CROSLEY
RHEA CROSLEY

Annapolis, MD



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