Eternity's Edge

This piece is a gift from Heaven.

My wife passed away and went to Heaven and I believe she sent me this vision.  It was what she first saw.


My mind has stretched out to the edges of eternity.
There is no way back now.
Too caught up in all that eternal flow.
Here is light and color in words.
Even thoughts come as rainbows and three dimensional feeling. It is so wonderful I just can not say with earthly words. Tears of joy drop like rain from my face.

This must be the outer edges where God dwells
I have shivers of joy throughout my body my skin tingles with excitement there is an overwhelming euphoria of love and beauty that defies the grandest imagination .

How can I return or should I,
I see now there they are. WOW! Thousand; no tens of thousand of angels.
They are lit up like- like oh so grand so wonderful where are words that reach so high.
If I do not make it back its OK.
 I hope you will join me.
P.S. Death is not so bad when you know "the one who inhabits eternity."

Copyright Rhea Crosley

Reviews

[Dani California]

Rhea, this is it!!
Eternity..
Wow... !!
It seems everywhere I
turn today, this is
what I'm reading about...
eternity, Heaven, love...
eternal love

This is gorgeous!
I can't read
it enough...
It brings me peace
within.

As I'm sure it has you my friend.

Thank you!!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[A.r. Bazian]

i loved it!
i LOVED IT~
maybe, i mean, lets agree to disagree about some points regarding the concepts of death and God! i Personally, agree with ur P.S. Line though! magical!
but looking at it ur way makes it maybe even more beautiful than it seems!
i loved the way! maybe i tend to go towards rhyme, but this doesn't really need one!
many of its elements maybe enough!

i loved it!

[Mistral Bilgera]

P.S. Death is not so bad when you know "the one who inhabits eternity."

i love it!!! it gives hope to us mortals to view death not as a horrible experience, but in fact something to be embraced and anticipated for it'll be our ultimate relief from all the earthly worries we have, and eternity as God's reward.

thank you for sharing :)

[StriDe]

That was nice...

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Wow truly a beautiful poem! A message of hope that goes beyond life itself! You're a great poet and your artisticness goes beyond the cosmos! Eternal hope is like eternal love. When one finds them, they both help make you live a better life on this planet we call earth and will both be there with you in the eternity after!
Loved this poem. It gave me get joy to read it!
Sorry to hear about your loss!
Keep writing from your soul for the good of all souls!
Always a friend,
TIM

PS. love your music on this site, it's so soothing to my soul!

[Phil Sanders]

You made a tear come to my eye with this .. so touching .. so emotional .. so beautifully written ....

[Helena]

This was so special and beautiful Rhea. I too experienced something like that
once, but could not put it into words so eloquently as you and its true,
death holds no sting once you have glimpsed the otherside....

Thank you for sharing this wonderful inspirational poem.

God Bless,

Helena

[DrumMajorPod]

"Light and color in words.." Wow! What an amazing line! "How can I return or should I?" Stay there.. you are blessed. =] Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece!

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

This is an incredible piece!

It is very moving, very honest. It speaks of what we all hope to find in the End, in such a passionate way..

I commend you for this!

I hope it helped you.. Thank you for sharing.