Eternal Lovers

A love that never dies.

                                        

Rick and Charlene are to be married and their love most evident abounds.

"In sickness and in health" this love always surrounds.

 

Their love is not just an earthly passing.

No it is a love that is everlasting.

 

The type of love of which the gates of hell could not prevail.

This is the love that Angles guard and nothing can assail.

 

Time will only make it stronger and more sure.

Problems will all be worked out with the “double cure”.

 

This love shall be filled up and overflow from a spring that runs for evermore.

This love will bless many and on lookers will say this is love we adore.

 

So when in many years this is seen and they are old.

Remember this true story of love was foretold.

 

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

Beautiful Rhea!

I love reading about love! lol
What a nerd I am!

"This love shall be filled up and overflow from a spring that runs for evermore.
This love will bless many and on lookers will say this is love we adore."

That spring...
the one that runs for evermore..
I believe it's right next to,
that moment. :)

Thank you for sharing this Rhea, it's just lovely!
I really enjoy your work my friend :)

[Angel's Lady]

This love shall be filled up and overflow from a spring that runs for evermore.
This love will bless many and on lookers will say this is love we adore.

What a way you have with words...

[Kal]

very good writing and so much meaning with simple words :)
nice man!

[Mr. Lopez]

I enjoy reading about love in its true form. Where there are two people that are ready and equipped with each others trust for armor. As you say there will be problems in life but when pitted against love, love will always prevail. Great poem my friend !!!

[darkgurl]

"The type of love of which the gates of hell could not prevail.
This is the love that Angles guard and nothing can assail." Love these lines right here, actually loved the whole write, this is a most wonderful write, enjoyed this.