Seeking Wonderful Women

Lover looking for the right one.

Searching for a women with a heart of gold
not too young not too old.

One that is not sold out to seeking wealth.
One who has a heart that thinks of more then self.

Searching for a women that wants love and relationship more than gold.
A lover who wants to sit by the dock of the bay as a story of love is told.

Who listens to music and will take flight.
One who dares to travel with little money stay up and talk at night.

Someone I can serve as a queen but will treat me as the prince I am.
A women who knows God and holds His hand who knows the great "I AM"

A women who has spark and lights a fire.
Who enjoys to see her flame reach more then she thought she could desire.

Someone I can surprise with love and life and joy.
One who's heart can reach out  with out false ploy.

A women I can give all my pay;
Then trust her to do what she may.

A women who loves to be loved.
Whose heart can fly with the dove.

A women who can laugh at herself at me and still hold respect for both.
A women who can soar with me to the heavens and serve others in truth.

A women that will will make it clear where she stands.
One who will straight out hit me in the head if it will help our plans.

A women who can enjoy being funk without having to be drunk.
One that loves to have luck and doesn't want to stay stuck.

A women who wants to dance our souls together in an undying celebration.
A women  who is not afraid to let me be a man, guard her from condemnation.

Someone who I can dream about everyday no matter where I am.
One not afraid to be loved and live a wonderful plan.

I know your out there, your not daft.
And when you read this you will probably laugh.

Hey that is OK,
eternity is our day.

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

How terrific! This would make a great personal ad! Of course, it would probably cost an arm and a leg to print and once they read the part where you are going to hand over your pay, your phone will never stop ringing! But I liked it very much! Nicely done! (Psst, where you work anyway?) hahaha Great write! Good job!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely poem. Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[mysticgmekeepr]

I have no doubt she will appear. You have put the word out into the universe and it will draw her near.
Lovely tribute to all that a woman and a man can be for each other.

[closed account]

a great description of what you are seeking!! *LOVE* now come on is that too much to ask for??? I think not! nice job.. :-)

[Kal]

PERFECT!!!!
nice dude...
i mean it's like a beautiful melody...
i liked it

[Susan S.]

You need to watch your spelling. It should read, "Not too young, not too old" There are several more similar.

[Christina2]

She's out there, patience and gratitude will bring her to you. Be happy where you are, keep discovering self and loving and respecting. A beautiful sentiment to a wonderful woman and relationship.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is beautiful..and it is one of those writing which I would love to read over and over again...
I found myself very close to it (and even could relate myself with it very well!)
Brilliant piece of writing, so deep and emotional!
Great work :)

[Dani California]

Ahhh.. this is wonderful! So playful, yet sincere...
I really enjoyed this Rhea!

"A women who can laugh at herself at me and still hold respect for both.
A women who can soar with me to the heavens and serve others in truth"

My favorite part :)

I love your style and flow as well...
Very nicely done!! Thank you for sharing my friend :)

[emmajoy]

They - whoever they is, say there is someone for everybody. Consequently, shout this poem from the roof tops and, who knows, that special lady will hear, stop a while to listen and, in time - 'cos it takes time, you'll live happily ever after.

The requirements you mention are so wonderful... 'Searching for a women that wants love and relationship more than gold.A lover who wants to sit by the dock of the bay as a story of love is told'.... 'A women who can laugh at herself at me and still hold respect for both. A women who can soar with me to the heavens and serve others in truth.' Oh I could just put down every word...

This truly is a poem that has it all.. God willing she won't laugh, she'll love.